Marathon
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crowds,
roads
trams
I ran amidst all
anger lust
frustration Love?
and I reached
a pavement
stood still for an eternity
and then
I jumped
in front
of an expensive bright BMW
called life no reply
hands outstretched
felt the smoothness
God drove away expensively leering
I gazed on till
eyes closed
I lay on the path near that pavement
where I had reached
after a marathon
in search of God
and when I stopped
I got killed.
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What a marathon of life…
Excelentt.
Good one….with a visual appeal, gripping, intense and fast.